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Maybe One Day
Author: The Lost Girl

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All this pain consumed inside me,
grows every day, even with this writing.
I thought maybe, possibly it would help,
to write down my thoughts, and tell the world how I felt.
But like all other things, it has failed,
It is just something else, contained in my personal jail.
Cutting's a habit, and quitting is hard,
I didn't think the self-abuse would go very far.
Though once again, I was wrong,
I'm only 15, but I've done it for so long.
Counting the scars would go on for days.
Weaving and winding in a crimson maze.
Maybe one day I'll find a better release.
Maybe one day, I'll receive peace.

------- Author's Notes -------

Comments are appreciated

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Aimee: ) (210.55.106.97) -- Sunday, January 9 2005, 05:28 am

sad

nice writing! your a good writer! writting does take away some of the pain! i hope you find much happiness
Diamond (64.12.116.197) -- Wednesday, March 23 2005, 03:25 am

i understand wut ur saying

i have been cuttin for many years im 16 and i just recently got out of the phsyiatric hospital(however u spell it) and that wuz hell but i got out and i still cut....
KinKyB (64.12.116.197) -- Thursday, March 24 2005, 06:43 am

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WoW! touching!%^*$$%$@##$!
 
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