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Emptiness
Author: Jughead

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Once again
This feeling arises in me
The emptiness
I hate it
But i have no idea
or what so ever to fill it up
with what and by what
Help me
I need somebody
I dont even have anyone in mind
to think of
How pathetic can it get
I dont hate girls
It's just that i cant find one
that belongs to me
who is willing to share my sorrow
Happiness and stuff
I dont even know why i turn to poem writing
If this is life then all i can say is
it sucks
It's boring
Monotonous
I have friends
But i dont feel close to them
Why
Am i too big a failure to even have
real budds
Pals
My life is in the
drains
I cant smile
I dont have a killer-body
Nor do i have a good sense of
Humour
Know tell me the people
upstairs
Just what am i good at
I really dont know
I seem to just do things as it is
No break through
I've slowly become a person i dislike
And thats
ME
Myself

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Comments on this poem/writing:

leah (204.112.163.228) -- Monday, January 10 2005, 03:12 am

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good poem , i understand some of your pain, hang in there things will get better in time.
Aimee *aka* bubz (210.55.106.113) -- Monday, January 10 2005, 09:40 pm

jughead - dont be so hard on yourself - AIMEE

dont be so hard on yourself!!!everybody has there faults!!!Some people can just hide them better than others!!!I bet you are a lovly person!!!you say you are not good at anyything but you are good at writting and expressing feelings that most guys find really hard to do!!!soon you will be able to smile!!!just make the most out of life as every day is your last!!!life is what you make it!!! Dont stop and think about the bad stuff!!! think positive!!!make 2005 an awesome year!!!
i hope you can find strenght to do this!!!
christine *aka* dimples (210.55.106.37) -- Thursday, January 20 2005, 09:05 am

i agree

i totally agree with aimee(who happens to be my best friend) you are way too hard on yourself. you are an incredible poet!!!!!!!!!! dont give up on yourself. one day you will find someone who wont give a stuff about your bod, or your faults. it may take awhile, but dont give up, coz i found someone like that, who is incredible and loves me for who i am. she'z a very special person (as u can probably tell from above) and i know that if you hold out you will find someone like her. anyway, u got us here!!!! we have no idea wat u look like, sound like, act like, or who your friends are. we know you thru your poems and from what i can see, you are amazing. dont lose hope
sha (218.186.39.19) -- Thursday, January 20 2005, 11:37 am

stars fade.. dunt worry.. u'll c them sumdae..

i feel ur heart pain man.. and u're makin me cry!! seriously. eh.. u're good. miss sitting beside u listening to ur 'shits'.. haha =p wish u all da best ahead.
 
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