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You Did It
Author: RubyDragon

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I can't see anything, it hurts
trying to imagine a future, a plan,
there is nothing, just like my soul
no promises, no dreams, just your hand,
holding my cold beating heart, dripping
it's too late, now away from you I'm slipping'

Take a look out the window at the snow
remember this moment while I kiss you,
on the cheek tenderly and whisper a sweet nothing
feel the hot tear as I walk without a clue,
what could've been, but I feel alone
even when I'm with you this isn't my home,

You brought this between us, when you,
ignored me, hurt me, made me cry,
now it's time to be honest, I've gotta go
it's your fault you have caused the love to die,
So I'll go now, don't stop me, it's too late
didn't think you could, but you made me hate!!

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Leah06 (67.169.135.192) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 05:34 am

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what ever is causing this, its done wonders for you latley. but where is it coming from? great writing!
 
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