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Dance With Me
11 January, 2005
Author: RubyDragon

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I close my eyes and see you there
standing right before me, glowing,
I want you here in my arms,
caressing you, my love is growing,
wanting from the first time we met
time was tearing me, motive was set,

Your beauty beckons me near
are you the one for me, who knows?
lets take the risk, find out true
before my soul is carried by a crow,
to a land of fear, so long forgot
while my body lays on ice to rot,

Can you romance me, save my fate
fall in love with me, free your heart,
I'll show you a world you've never known
a world that won't tear us apart,
where we can only be free
to lay together in love for eternity.

Dance with me!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (67.169.135.192) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 06:31 am

to dance with you

wow, you just keep amazing me with your writing laltey. im amazed. and you will get your chance to dance with her, and she will get her chance to dance with you, keep looking for her, shes there somewhere.
joyce ivy (70.144.199.12) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 08:42 am

RubyD

awesome write...I really enjoyed it...thanks for sharing a part of your soul....joyce
Aimee *aka* bubz (202.89.42.196) -- Friday, January 14 2005, 05:35 am

Ruby

my goodness that is beautifull...
love your poem!!!
kept writting
RinRin (66.56.198.47) -- Friday, January 14 2005, 05:31 pm

:)

There is a network flowing and erupting from your words...a pattern...an indescribable feeling...it's just...indescribable!

*RinRin*
Terrie* (65.136.6.99) -- Friday, January 14 2005, 05:43 pm

RD......AWESOME...like WOW!!!!

OOOOOOO...i feel the passion that's burnin' in your words..i must add..other than feedin' a hungry heart, an appetite fulfilled...i agree w/RinRin this is totally an "UNDESCRIBABLE" desirable read..love it.... your so GIFTED......thanz for sharin'..
 
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