Monster In The Mirror
Author: Britney


I look in the mirror with depise
The monster in the mirror brings tears to my eyes
Everytime i look it's a face other than me
it's truley ugly hidous what i think how
could you see something that beautiful
I think you need glasses to see
"oh she's beautiful" what are you smoking
nothing to good it's a monster
The monster I see is me.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Thursday, January 20 2005, 04:13 pm


I do the same Britney. Doesn't it seem like the mirror changes from time to time? One day the mirror makes me look ok, the next, I almost jump out of my skin at what I see. But, we aren't monsters are we Britney? We are pretty ladies, who just have to look in the mirror and say, "Ok, I'm not a J. LO, but I'm proud of my face and body". Plus, we're both blessed to have eyes to see what we look like; many people don't have their eyesight.

So, we aren't monsters Britney, we're both
pretty girls! YEAH!
Great expression Britney!!
joyce ivy ( -- Thursday, January 20 2005, 04:35 pm


I to hold this day I see me..the next..well it's the haunting eyes staring back at me...great job...thanks....joyce
Britney ( -- Friday, January 21 2005, 01:12 am


Thanks Meri yeah true were not monsters sometimes feels like the mirror lies to us doesn't it? Yeah about some people can't see. Thanks Joyce too really nice to hear this from such two great ladies.~ Amor Britney~
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