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Frozen Ashes
Author: RubyDragon

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Too many emotions built up inside
I don't know where to turn,
driven crazy in my own mind
battered wings and my soul begins to burn,
I want you by my side to comfort me
yet you don't even see the reality,
of how much I really love you true
trying to pretend it's a fantasy,
can't hide no more, won't stop
hating the fact that your not mine,
got to destroy these feelings
before I cross way over the line,
heading too far, I need control
lying in the ice cold ashes of my soul,
time to rise with the fire
and find a free singular desire!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (67.169.135.192) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 05:15 am

wow...

Wow! This is just fantastic! I am so amazed with this one, i cen really feel it. Great job!
~Leah
joyce ivy (70.144.199.12) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 07:39 am

CoolRubyD

cool write...and yes some times our emotions can destroy us..we do sometimes cross that line....loved you line....lying in the ice cold ashes of my soul...that was great....thanks...joyce
Megan (64.12.116.74) -- Sunday, February 13 2005, 05:37 pm

Frozen Ashes

this poem is wonderful in my opinion. your poem is about life, and what people feel during life. It is very real, and I like it a lot.
 
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