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I Can...
Author: FoRsAkEn

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I can say i don't love you
I can say i don't care
I can say i won't try to be there
I can say i can hide it
I can promise it won't leak
I can say i won't be weak
I can say i'll move on and love again
I can even say that ur just a friend
I can say that seeing u together doesn't make me sad
I can say that u never made me mad
I can say all those things buh onlee mean two
tha rest are all juss lies i cannot do
I knoe i can love again
and think of you as juss a friend
but there will still be a part of me that won't let go
and that's what i want you to knoe
people and oceans may keep us apart
buh no matter wut ur still in my heart

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.83.70) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 02:20 pm

Good

I really like your! ~Britney~
Terrie* (65.136.7.20) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 10:03 pm

such depth..such feeling...like WOW!!

FoRsAkEn, this was soooooo beautiful and a heart tugger too...thanx for sharin'.......you are truely a deep writer...
joyce ivy (65.12.35.177) -- Tuesday, January 18 2005, 03:06 pm

FoRsAKEN

this is such a beautiful write..so very hearrt touching...thanks for sharing a part of our heart...joyce
sistar (66.223.226.218) -- Wednesday, April 20 2005, 04:50 am

i can?

you know me.. always wondering who this & that is for.. good job again brawder.. =
 
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