Something About Gods Creations And The Snow by Terrie*

When we spoke on the phone
I shared a thought with you of how
Gods creations ignites my heart on fire
it's flawless beauty draws my passion into desire
then you surprised me by coming home today
placed me in your arms and carried me away

we took a drive
as we enjoyed the many things God kept alive
we ended up at that one little spot
that you and I found hot

the cabin's picture window overlooking the waterfall
brings in an image of the perfect post card
as we stand besides the fireplace
I feel the romance with out the roses and the candle light
as you take me in your arms and sing a sweet melody
and slow dance the night away

we start to witness snowflakes drift down
you pretend that each one talked or made a unique sound
you always amazed me in everything you say and do
I was always so blessed to be the one being loved by you

well today you are gone
it has been almost 5 months
your best friend Rob promised you my tears shall not stay too long

he and his wife tried to re-live that happy day for me
the one we shared with him the one
that I kept so close to my heart
every tear that fell from my eye
he gently dried

every laughter I burst out with and cried
he had me listen to your laughter in the silent echo
that hid behind my heart
he had me feel your touch
in every snow ball we made
in every song that he sang he had me feel the presence of your heart

in every snow flake that fell
he gave each one a name
the one that fell directly on my lips
he named after you

when we went inside
as he built a fire
he had me see your face looking at me
he took me in his arms
and danced that last dance for you
when I was tired
he had me lay down to feel and hear your heartbeat

before I closed my eyes
he had me place you into my heart
before I fell asleep
he had me place you into all of my dreams
and to keep your memory alive

with and without the snow
when i fell asleep
Robby and his wife
covered me with your love

and silently watched over me..

Robby flew in and paid me a visit today we were Sitting here thinking of the SNOW and the trips we made every January..

an old poem written in 1992 i wanted to share...Robby and his wife were very dear, he and his wife divorced in 1994..

sometimes all we can carry deep in our hearts are our memories..and alot of my poems re-vive those pleasant memories for me..every time it snows i know he is also thinking of me.....

Brett (142.204.88.180) -- Friday, January 14 2005, 07:07 am

wow
I can't say enough about this poem. The level of meaning is incredible and it amazes me that you can express your happiness so well. I really wish I could do the same.

Excellent job! Great piece of writing!

Terrie* (65.148.214.146) -- Friday, January 14 2005, 09:30 am

Well thank you so kindly, Brett....
believe me you said enough..when those feelings can be felt by another then my words have shared the magic he left for me to share...once again thank you..it is comments like yours that i owe my writing to..

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