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I'm Changing
Author: KitKatrina

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Thereís always going back,
A huge turning point for me,
Changing my whole life,
So I can be who I want to be.

Iím so tired of feeling this way,
Tired of dealing with the facts,
I canít stand it another day,
So why canít I just go back?

A year ago I couldnít have felt better,
I was very happy with myself,
Everything I had accomplished,
And I was in good health.

Now I sit here today looking back,
I never appreciated anything I had,
And now I am realizing it,
Well it just makes me mad.

I know Iím not happy anymore,
I know I can go back to the old me,
So why can I just do it,
Why isnít this motivating me?

Here and now Iím writing it down,
Telling myself that I must try,
I can accomplish anything,
I canít let this opportunity pass me by.

Mark my words, ďIím changing,Ē
Now Iím telling all of you,
I guess I must do it now,
Maybe then Iíll motivate you too.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (68.248.253.191) -- Sunday, January 16 2005, 05:10 pm

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changes are always good. we always go through changes. just a natural part of life. every time we change we face two paths. seems your choosing the right one. (to you of course)
i like the second to the last stanza. its like the climax of the poam. just now say "doing it NOW" it really sticks out. congrats, you did an overall good poam.
 
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