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Invisable Child
14 October, 2002
Author: CD

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What happened to the little girl,
it was something really sad.
So isolated and pushed aside
by both her mom and dad.
It was like she didn't matter
and that she just wasn't there.
It doesn't make no sense,
parents are suppose to care.
Always being overlooked,
she just did not exist.
Never being held or hugged
or ever being kissed.
Mommy you never talked to me
I must have been a ghost.
All my life it's this,
it's this thats hurt the most.
You use to sit and watch
while daddy beat me down.
I still remember the whispering
no one wanting me around.
Whatever happened to the little girl
that never had a place.
I guess it's me that's asking you,
your looking in my face.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Lizbeth (198.170.191.45) -- Wednesday, November 20 2002, 11:02 pm

it's good

This poem get's uou to the heart. Not only that but also, this is how alot of people fell about there family they just don't know how to put all that pain down on a peace of paper.
grey (4.62.216.243) -- Monday, September 27 2004, 03:25 am

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if im correct this is based on you did your mother really do nothing i hace heard of a simaler happining i have a freind who lives next door to me her father beats her and she has told her mother and her mother has seen but she dosent do anything she just tells her to keep out of his way and not make him mad i dont understand it she comes to me sometimes and i sneak her into my house so she dosent have to sleep there when he is drunk cause thats when he beats her
Vanessa (205.188.116.197) -- Thursday, March 10 2005, 07:32 am

Feeling The Pain!!!

I JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW THESE WOMEN KEEP HAVING KIDS WHEN THERE NOT GOING TO TREAT THEM LIKE LITTLE ANGLE THAT THEY ARE, WHEN THEY ARE BORN!
 
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