Author: Shadaan


is a mystery,
that no one knows
It is a thorn
on a beautiful rose.
A rose which is,
extremely pretty to see,
But when you try to hold it,
it stings like a bee.
is something strange.
it makes you happy,
and sometimes,
it makes you sad.
It is like a coin,
which has two sides.
One that is good,
and the other that is bad.
is a play,
and we are the actors.
The starting,
and the ending,
depend on us.
is like a garden,
full of flowers.
Some,that are dull
and some that are bright.
Some that have bloomed,
pretty and gay,
while some little flowers,
that have,
faded away.
is a story,
written by God.
A fantasy,
that is still to be explored...


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Sunday, January 23 2005, 07:06 pm


Wonderful thesaurus your brain holds! I've been taught a lesson from your poem, or a lecture if you will. That life can be so many things, it depends on how we perceive it.
Shadaan ( -- Monday, January 24 2005, 04:06 pm


Thanks Meridian,I am new to poetry writing and am an amateur.This was my first poem,glad you liked it :)Thanks for your comments and compliment.

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