No Promises
30 January, 2005
Author: Your Melody
I finally found my reason
to reach for the stars and have some fun.
I saw you wasting your life away
afraid her rejection would always stay.
Reach for the moon and land among the stars
you can always escape from these suffocating bars.
Your day will come with her by your side
but as for now, reach out and let her go
for yesterday she died.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| joyce ivy (68.222.112.79) -- Sunday, January 30 2005, 07:34 am great write...reach out for the moon and land among the stars....great melody...love your work...joyce |
| Terrie* (65.148.208.38) -- Sunday, January 30 2005, 02:49 pm Y.M, this can bring many down to their knees..and reach up high..i believe this is one of the most beautiful and sincere reads i have read in a while...the moon and stars promise us to light up the sky... and those that we love have claimed and have their name written upon the stars...than you for sharing your heart... |
| capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Sunday, January 30 2005, 09:39 pm I love this! -- written with incite and sensitivity. Great! |
| Your Melody (207.190.93.133) -- Monday, January 31 2005, 01:00 am Thank you all for your comments. I swear that sometimes everyone here understands my poetry/thoughts better than I do sometimes. LOL :) YM |
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