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Entwined
Author: Capricorn

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They guzzled refreshment from the goblet
and felt invigorated, yet filled with a hunger.

Slipping off her translucent garment,
she left it draped across the floor
where her slender shape
rippled in sensuous rhythm.

He glided nearer as she gazed with eyes
like black beads, gleaming with anticipation.
He nuzzled her silky flesh with rising fervour.
Soon they trembled in sinuous symmetry;
muscles moving in fascinating foreplay.

Their aroused bodies slowly entwined;
instinctively the jigsaw of their sexuality
merged as the mating ritual of the couple
of corn snakes, reached its climax.

------- Author's Notes -------

Note - the `translucent garment' relates to the shedding of the snakes skin.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Dino (152.163.100.74) -- Monday, January 31 2005, 03:17 am

Wow-wee!

Whoo, I thought it was a neglige? Nice read. Us old guys could use what's in that goblet they were drinking. Thanks Cap. I really enjoyed it.
Terrie* (65.136.7.146) -- Monday, January 31 2005, 10:42 am

Cap , very capturing .....

I can almost hear the hissssssing in the grass blades...this was indeed as Dino expressed a very enjoyable "NICE" read....your creative writing amazes me hun......thanz for sharin'...
Cap (82.36.129.85) -- Monday, January 31 2005, 03:39 pm

Hi Dino

Fooled ya! -- it's just skin. LOL!! Glad you enjoyed. When I find out what was in that goblet, I'll let you know. I'm looking for some too.
Cap (82.36.129.85) -- Monday, January 31 2005, 03:41 pm

Hi Terrie

Thanks for your words of praise and glad you found this enjoyable.
joyce ivy (70.144.199.126) -- Monday, January 31 2005, 08:32 pm

WOW

have a lot of passion bottled up here..enjoyable read...thanks for sharing....
Cap (82.36.129.85) -- Monday, January 31 2005, 11:08 pm

Hi Joyce

Ha ha!! -- glad you enjoyed it.
Marisol Rodriguez (66.249.83.95) -- Saturday, April 30 2016, 11:25 pm

Entwined by capricorn

This was awsome and i loved it.I felt aroused by the way you wrote it. Very well written. Can't wait to reas more od your poems. Hope one day to write as good as.you.
barb (66.103.59.37) -- Wednesday, May 25 2016, 03:26 am

holy

When I started reading this I thought cap wouldn;t write this. then I realized it was about your snakes,you had me,smarty your imagination is perfect for writing keep it coming
 
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