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Round And Round
Author: Crush Me

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once again, we're back to where we started. at the begining of the story. Why do we do these things, we already know where this is going to end. why dont you do anything right? you ask, its just over and over i hear the same things, i dont believe you, your doing this to me. why dont you just listen once and realize you will never get passed this boundry. this circle of lies and tears fallen down. you know deep down you have never trusted me or listened to a single thing i had to say. you didnt believe even when i told the truth. you too stubborn to let anything through. like i have told you before you wasting you breath telling me these things. i already know you dont believe a single thing i say, or trust me when i go out with a friend. its falling apart because you refuse to put back this empty space of trust. its all leaving because you mind is set. around and around i go through everyday listening to everything you say, around and around on this death road we take, all because of one mistake!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.170.188.18) -- Monday, January 31 2005, 05:36 pm

She's back! Yes!

Good God! Poem-o-rama! Round and round eh? All it takes is one error, and people will take that and run with it! They don't acknowledge all the good you've done, all it takes is that one mistake. Don't you just hate it? Pretty words Crush Me!
joyce ivy (70.144.199.126) -- Monday, January 31 2005, 08:30 pm

Crush Me

very good...and yes it just takes one thing and the trust is gone...usually never to be regained...sometimes you just have to move on...thanks for sharing...
Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Tuesday, February 1 2005, 03:03 am

Great

This was a great poem! ~Britney~
 
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