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The Little Things
1 February, 2005
Author: Leah06

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You take advantage of the little things
Not realizing they are all I want
Experiences that don’t matter to you
Would mean the entire world to me.
You critique all the special things
That I haven’t ever even felt
Wanting them to be more perfect
When I just want to have a chance.
Kisses are just an action to you
When I sit here and fantasize them
Wondering when it’s my turn
Because 17 years has been long enough.
All the friends you have love you
You don’t see them there
I don’t understand you
But I wish I had friends who’d care.
You won’t believe me
Or trust my words or thoughts
But why do you ask for my opinion
When you don’t listen anyway.
Why am I sitting here writing to you
When I know you would never care
Because deep down I think I love you
And I wish you'd know I was there.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Tuesday, February 1 2005, 04:01 am

Good

I really liked your poem! ~Britney~
martin Vann (63.25.150.35) -- Tuesday, February 1 2005, 05:49 pm

We All Wish They Cared & Their Words, Were True

Leah06;

No, I have not forgotten you. I read your poems, a road map of what, your heart is going through and its hard, I have been there to.

Its, hard, to find love that is true, but love is complicated, because it involves two hearts, searching for the same thing, which, is so, hard to find. So, don't work, at loving, just gain all the strength that you need, by being yourself, and trusting your heart!

With Love,
UM
Leah06 (67.169.135.192) -- Friday, February 4 2005, 02:34 am

Britney and UM

Britney- I noticed you have been reading a few of my poems latley, thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I am really glad you like my writing and i hope to hear from you again soon.
~Leah Kendall
UM- I am glad you havent forgotten me. I am trying so hard to be myself, but its hard. I feel like im not being accepted and thats what i am trying to express through my writing. And i dont trust my heart wich is a problem. But im trying! Much Love!
~NL
 
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