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I Dont Know Why
Author: Ashley Justice

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i dont know why i put up
with all the things i do
i dont know why im even here
or even why im still with you
i dont know why i love you
i dont know but i do
i dont know why i let you talk
to me the way you do
i dont know why i try so hard
to keep you here with me
i dont know why im even here
im not even happy
i dont know why i tell myself
youre all i'll ever need
i dont know whats wrong with my head
i need to set you free.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Thursday, February 3 2005, 03:49 am

great

i liked your poem it was good! Britney
joyce ivy (68.19.178.46) -- Thursday, February 3 2005, 07:01 am

Ashley

sometimes we develope a compulsive behavior...such as a need to have someone at all times..and we can't figure out why...when in truth we only need ourselves...we have to learn to love and trust our selves...and then we learn what our needs really are....thanks for the write...very good emotions inside your poem...joyce
Laura Owens (199.29.196.5) -- Friday, February 24 2006, 02:15 pm

This poem is GREAT!!!!!!

This is an excellent poem... i think everyone feels that way sometimes when they are in a relationship... whether it be friends or lovers...
 
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