I Feel You From A Distance by Terrie*

you make my heart melt
when I feel you from a distance

i start to imagine
what it would be like
when i see you for the first time

i visualize my arms wrapped around my soul
as my heart
looks from a soft silky cloud
connecting with yours
coming to a complete stop

I saw it all even though
my eyes were shut real tight

I saw your soul looking around
searching for me
I could tell that your heart found mine
by the glow that set in
i could feel it all
as i keep my hand pressed to my heart

I knew what we found
is far more than chemistry
when I see your soul and mine dancing happily

they say that love is blind
perhaps that may be true
but I love the joy
that has over come me
when i felt the the fingers of your soul
wrap themselves all around me

i believe that real love
trumps
all things imaginary far and beyond
that people think the worst of
with a communicating heart

as i sit here thinking of you
I felt you at a distance
it makes my heart come to a stop

i could feel my blood rush
and flow deep within every vein
as it got it beating once again

when I saw you for the first time
I saw it all
with my eyes looking into my heart

I saw what I felt
from these feelings
you tattood
in my heart....

Jeremy Morzos (10.0.0.127) -- Friday, February 4 2005, 10:44 pm

I like it.
I like it it's a beautiful piece of work.

Terrie* (65.148.215.91) -- Saturday, February 5 2005, 12:54 am

Jeremy, THANK YOU....
it's such a great uplifting feelin' (guess i haven't lost the feelin' hahahaa).... when someone acknowledges and appreciates my thoughts...thank you ...thank you soooooo much i appreciate your warm comment......Terrie*

Amber (209.215.59.72) -- Saturday, February 5 2005, 03:35 am

great
Great poem Terrie. It is wonderful to connect to someones soul. Love your work.

joyce ivy (65.12.35.197) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 07:15 pm

Terrie ( AWESOME)
This is awesome...Loved it greatly....to visualize someones arms wrapped around your soul...is a beautiful feeling...to feel the chemistry between two people as it makes you soul dance happily...to feel the fingers of someones soul wrap around you....this is great..I think you summed real love up here...real love is better than anything imaginary...love the work you put into yhis piece...thanks for sharing...joyce

Terrie* (65.150.174.204) -- Friday, February 11 2005, 05:58 am

Amber,
thank you sooo much for you warm comment....it means so much to know that my words touched someone...and that they can comprehend the meanin' and the feelings...Terrie*

Terrie* (65.150.174.204) -- Friday, February 11 2005, 06:03 am

Joyce,thanx for adjusting your day to read/comment
most definently yes.... in order to know real love, one must FEEL the heart and soul..upon every inhaling and exhaling breath....before commiting ..into a relationship...it is far more than chemistry it is life of two hearts sharing and living and celebrating life...it is about the love given by a higher life..yes i am so in.....an unwasted feeling...glad ya liked....Terrie*

Sweetvenom (61.2.32.132) -- Saturday, February 12 2005, 07:42 pm

Wow, Terrie!! Once Again
Its a magnificent piece of work. The way you have expressed even made me realize the effect. Enchanting!- is the word I would use for the kind of feeling you get. And the way you have put it is too good.
Go Ahead and unleash more of your feelings. Its really good to share good things like this.
I love it.
Sweetvenom

Keyonna Farrell (205.188.116.197) -- Sunday, February 13 2005, 11:48 pm

beautiful
I realy liked this, especially how you are very descriptive with words. Thank you so much for sharing.

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