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Played
Author: Amber H

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you played me once you played me twice you made me twice you made me think you were really nice you gave me life you took it away made me think you were here to stay you used to say forever i should have known never i should have known to that day all you wanted was to get

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ym (207.190.93.41) -- Friday, September 26 2003, 12:22 am

wow

nicely put, soft subject to most of us, but you captured the hatered and regret in a nut shell, very priceless
Amber H (205.188.209.45) -- Monday, September 29 2003, 04:44 am

thanks

ya the is really close to my heart i didnt want to and he made me feel like i had to
 
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