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Bye
Author: Britney

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Sad to say I love you when I wish it wasn't true
I cry tears every single day. How can you hurt me like you
do. I'm always so blue.

Silents tears I cry each day and night.
I sit and think how do I still manage everyday while
I think i'm over you everyday.

You bring me much worry and yes its true.
Sorry for everything but this is the end
and very true.

I was there and you weren't I was sad and you
weren't. You had smiles on when I had a major frown.
How could this be the picture isn't true and I learned
you weren't true either....

As sad this is to say goodbye and I hope everything
you had put me threw I loved you yet I didn't feel it from
you.........

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Jeremy (10.0.0.105) -- Saturday, February 5 2005, 06:38 pm

Hi Brit!

I really like the way this is written
It's good I enjoyed reading it and to have
feelings like that as well keep it up your doing a good job
Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Saturday, February 5 2005, 10:07 pm

Thanks!

Hey thanks I am so glad you enjoyed reading this I wrote it with alot of thought.Yes kinda true sad but yeah. Thanks for your comment made me smile once again thanks!
~Britney~
Nicole (67.136.121.12) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 11:53 pm

COOL

I love your poems!! Keep up the good work they are soo good!!! Nicole
Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 01:53 pm

Thank you.

I'm glad you enjoy my poems! I'll try to keep up the good work. Thanks again! :)
~Britney~
 
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