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Fake Smile
6 February, 2005
Author: Britney

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I have a smile on my face everything about it is so fake.
I have to give that smile to make it seem like nothings wrong
but deep down inside to many things are wrong.

I hide alot of things that are to hard to show.
Emotionally depressed that cause so much stress.
I don't really show my sadness cause I got to look i'm
doing good alot I have to show my friends nothing is wrong.

Yet all i'm doing is falling to much apart. So much
of me wants to think i'm ok when i'm not. So I put on
that fake smile to show people i'm ok when i'm not.

People won't understand they will try to help
but then when you tell them there response is this is life!
Thanks for helping me friend. But try my place then think
again then you'll know that the smile I have is really fake!

Then you wonder why i'm falling apart

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.143.159.85) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 10:44 pm

False

Feigning a smile, feigning happiness, seems easier, than actually wearing that frown, at times! Sistah Britney! Whew Glory! Don't I know what you're talking about, when you say, "faking a smile"!

Outstanding Britney! (This poem stands out)

Meri
Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 01:41 am

Thanks

Thanks for your comment! Its nice to know you enjoyed it! I am so glad you truley liked it!
~Britney~ :)
 
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