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Your Pain
Author: Britney

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I see the pain in your eyes I see the despise you hold.
I see you going against this world. Everything is messing
up for you now days. Things like this is why you try to
stay away from people these days.

The people look at you like you don't have feelings too.
I try to help but sometimes its too much when I have my things to
worry about too. I'm here for you though and you know it.

It pains me to see the new cuts on your skin
cause you feel to trapped so you decide to realease your pain
in such a hurtful way to hold some type of happiness within.

I see the pain in your eyes I see the hurt that you hurt
I realize the things that others don't don't worry i'm
here for you i'll listen when others won't i'll be here
when life is on it's tough roads.

Cry on my shoulder it will be ok wipe the tears
from your eyes because today the sun will shine for you
today!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luke Christopher (66.190.33.58) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 04:06 am

NICE!

That was awesome! That made me FEEL!
Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 02:13 pm

Luke

Thanks! I am so glad you liked my poem! Thanks for reading it.
~Britney~
 
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