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Admiration So Easily Put
Author: FoRsAkEn

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you've been around since before i know
you've taught me things and helped me grow
you have never given up on me
and have always been there to help me see
since i was small you've been thru it all
you've been there to pick me up when i fall
to brush me off and say "keep trying"
you've done things to stop the crying
you've been there through thick and thin
and helped me get outta trouble im in
you've put up with everything ive thrown at you
and you've always known just what to do
but the thing i admire most of all
is that you've never loved me less then all

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Terrie* (65.136.7.129) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 07:50 am

FoRsAkEn....

i admire your words here...
as i was readin' them someone whom i admire and think the world of came to mind...deep unforgettable penetrating words...thanx for sharin' your heart w/us...Terrie*
Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 02:21 pm

Wow

This was such an awesome and amazing poem I love every single line of it. Great poem I truley enjoyed it! Keep the good writing up!
~Britney~
Princess Moon (64.136.48.69) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 10:37 pm

Lovely

I really enjoyed this poem Forsaken, it was very lovely. I enjoyed it because it described several people I find very close to me. Great Job!~PM
sistar (66.223.226.218) -- Wednesday, April 20 2005, 04:45 am

sino yaN?

i remember your sn being something about like.. how someone you admired really let you down or something.. there could be a link i dunnoe.. dont ever (not respond) again;
lostandlone99 (69.50.49.61) -- Monday, August 14 2006, 06:10 pm

.....

me like this is very good ..
 
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