Fragile by Mike

Watching two people you thought were in love
Fall apart while the hate rises above.
What a sweet couple I thought they were,
Happiness is fragile, that I soon learnt.

You think you know someone as best as you can
But then they surprise you again and again.
They son will split up and what'll I do?
Be drifting away, my heart broken in two.

One of the sides belongs to him,
The blood and tears seeping over the brim.
The other side is all of hers,
Bigger and stronger but also more hurt.

Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Tuesday, February 8 2005, 03:02 pm

Good
I liked your poem I thought it was reall good and true.
~Britney~

Meridian (172.130.252.117) -- Tuesday, February 8 2005, 08:51 pm

Whiz brain
Publish a book Mike! In all seriousness, please publish one. I'll be the first to purchase it! As usual, as always, all the time, your poems got the juice! Meri

LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 01:14 am

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It is obvious that this is about your parents right?...If not then...THICK AGAIN! :'(...

Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Wednesday, March 23 2005, 11:28 pm

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My mom and dad split up.. I got seperated from my sister and dad. Different parts of the world.. Now 2 years later, we're all a family again. Just unfortunately in the wrong place. Everything works out in the end.

Mike (212.85.21.178) -- Thursday, April 7 2005, 04:26 pm

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Mine are on the brink of splitting up. :)

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