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You Let Her Down
Author: Britney

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I'm sitting here all alone trying to take on the world.
To scared to move to scared to breathe.
Yet if I tell my friends all they will say this is reality.

I cry tears every night, but there not clear there black.
Can't you hear me what I say?
But, no it's like i'm just a ghost left alone.

There is no days in my life anymore all I suceed to see is nightime.
See that girl all alone by her self in the night.
Don't you hear black tears she cries in her room night by night?
Can't you see her every fright?

She is there on the ground not saying words with a frown.
Her "friends" just say this is life.
Take a second, and think about it
she was always there for you and look you let her down.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy (65.12.35.197) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 05:35 pm

Britney

very good poem...you know we seem to always let someone down...but I think really what the problem is....is that we let ourselves down most of all...thanks for sharing your work....
Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 05:50 pm

Joyce

Thanks for the comment. Yeah, we can let someone down a lot. But when your friends let you down alot it tends to hurt a bunch you know? But you learn people if there a friend or not. ~Britney~
joyce ivy (65.12.35.197) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 06:18 pm

Britney

I know how you feel...friends or so called friends can hurt you a lot...Life usually balances out somewhere in all the confusion...Y/W on the comment...enjoy reading your work...joyce
Meridian (172.139.106.211) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 08:49 pm

Hello Hello Hello

Sometimes it may be hard to leave them, because you want to give them a second or a fifth chance, and overlook the fact that they've been hurting you. Because belive me, people have told me to disassociate myself from my "friends" but I was so dumb, I stayed with them, until I got to the point, where I realize, "Hey, what they said was right. I gotta leave this person." I wanted to be this girl's friend so bad, that I was like a fly on do-do. But, I'm glad I matured some. Stay on top Britney, don't let them get you to the bottom! Marvelous, just Excellent Britney!
Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 11:17 pm

Meridian......

Thanks you for your comment.!!!! Love always
Britney~~~
 
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