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Need For You
Author: Mere

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I wish she wouldn't scare me like this,
So far away, we can't hug or kiss.
I worry constantly, she doesn't know,
I hope she knows how much it hurts me though.
Except for the fact that I can't tell her,
I can't remember when happy we were.
I can't kill myself, it's hard to try,
When I think about what she's doing, I cry.
You see I'm obsessed, you see that I care,
You know that I'm too afraid to share.
I can't think about you without crying,
You know now, I'm tired of trying.
I'm hurting inside, I'm wanting to bleed,
I just wish that you'd see my need.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Thursday, February 10 2005, 01:32 pm

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A well written heartfelt poem
Megan (147.72.108.209) -- Thursday, February 10 2005, 02:17 pm

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This is deep.
Britney (172.16.1.232) -- Thursday, February 10 2005, 05:23 pm

Good

This is a good poem kinda intense but good.
~Britney~
Ash (66.195.12.46) -- Friday, February 11 2005, 06:59 pm

wow

I loved this poem. It descrines how I feel at this very moment. Keep writing. Congrats!
steph (207.200.116.199) -- Thursday, March 31 2005, 09:47 am

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nicely written i liked it :)
 
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