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Can't Let You Go
Author: Britney

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You didn't think I really cared when I really did.
You cheated me out of things that I didn't deserve
or did I and couldn't find out till the end? I stood
up thinking why oh why?

You told me things that hurt so much that now I hurt
inside. I feel lost and in discomfort because of how
you hurt me inside. Can't you see that pain of pain
the everlasting tears? Can't you hear I need you but
yet your to distant to hear?

I can scream and shout what I need and yet
you wouldn't know. I can cry you a river and let
it flow and yet you wouldn't care and even showed you know. Do you see the
hurt inside that I cannot hide?

Can't you feel everything thats so hidden but you
notice and do not say anything yet I don't know why.
Why do you do this to me? Is this purposley done?
It's as if you do this to me to have you feed on what
you did to me so you can be happy for once.

As if you needed to put me down in ways that you really wouldn't
know. I'll scream at you i'll cry my tears
yet you would never know. I'll frown and lie down but
like it would show. I guess the only reason is because
I love you to much to let you go....

------- Author's Notes -------

This is true in some ways to me.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Jose Andujar (69.119.181.64) -- Saturday, February 12 2005, 02:11 pm

What a similarity

We both right about the same things, Honestly you have beautiful writing... Are you still hurt or is this just a poem, or your inner feelings?
Britney (67.136.90.187) -- Saturday, February 12 2005, 07:42 pm

Hi

Thank you for sayign I have beautiful writing. :). I guess you can say I still hurt Inner feelings to I could say. Thanks again Jose i'm glad you liked it. ~Britney~
kerryxxx (81.153.91.7) -- Thursday, September 21 2006, 10:41 pm

why do we feel?

this poem is very deep sounds like its 2 an ex boyfriend ive been there when u cant let go its a part of ur life that will always haunt ux
Britney (24.121.42.133) -- Thursday, March 1 2007, 12:06 am

Thanks

Thanks for the feed back!!
chArm (121.1.14.98) -- Thursday, July 24 2008, 04:57 am

Can i?

can i use ur poem?
 
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