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Self Destruction
Author: Angel In Tears

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My insides are screaming out loud!
The blade helps them to get out,
Get released from my body,
Released from my blood, my skin,
This pain.

I dose away, from this world...away.
But the mental pain is still inside,
Still controlling my head.

But I don't care no more,
I feel light and aerie
Now that I have...
...bled away.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.84.49) -- Sunday, February 13 2005, 07:11 pm

Hi...

I liked your poem even know it's about cutting...........~britney~
Angel in Tears (81.129.19.4) -- Sunday, February 13 2005, 08:36 pm

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Thanks Britney! This was the first peom I have writen and I wasn't sure how ppl will take it,but I'm glad you like it!
Britney (67.136.84.49) -- Sunday, February 13 2005, 08:51 pm

Yeah

Your welcome....the first poem was really good to me at least I really did enjoy reading it. Keep it up....you shouldn't really care how people would react I mean if you think about it if you like it that should only matter you know? But your a really good poet to me keep it up! I hope to hear more from you...but yeah about the cutting :| ~Britney~ :)
Kali (10.36.1.1) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 08:29 pm

I can relate

I used to have a problem with cutting its kool to see someone else talk about it!
cryslyn norvell (age ) (72.20.141.105) -- Friday, January 5 2007, 07:25 pm

please!

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
let me use your poem for my poetry project.
IT ROX!
RIXTER (69.35.163.245) -- Tuesday, April 1 2014, 07:40 am

amazing

I really liked your poem, I know what its about, I have a 20 year old daughter that does the same thing, and she writes poems too. God how I miss her.. keep writing poems ok, you have talent.
 
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