Smile On My Face
I've envisoned of being happy when i'm not.
I think when will I be happy once or twice?
Well today is the day where I stand up tall being happy
once in for all.
I have a smile on my face with major grace!
For once in a while I smiled with pure joy I embrace.
I'll smile proud I'll show my joy.
I guess I'll make this smile last as long as I can
until then. Look today I have a truthful smile
on my face.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (184.108.40.206) -- Saturday, February 19 2005, 05:40 pm|
So you were showing your gums and your teeth eh? I love to read happy stuff! I'm glad to hear when the poets on this site, and when other people are elated, or estatic! Unfortunately, I can't smile yet, because I have to get some chapstick; my lips are cracked....lol! Jubilant poem! *Meri*
|Britney (220.127.116.11) -- Saturday, February 19 2005, 10:13 pm|
Hey girl. Thanks a million :D! yes showing some teeth over here!!!! Lol chapstick aye funny such a dork. Crack me up lol. Thanks a million again your friend,
|Robby (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, February 24 2005, 02:12 am|
Hey there Britney. You commented on my first peom and I wanted to shout back and say thanks for making me smile. I think that "Smile On My Face" was simple and sweet as well as it was fufilling. I definitely look forward to hearing more. :)
|Britney (172.16.2.18) -- Friday, February 25 2005, 05:21 pm|
I'm reading youe comment in my tech class right now. you made me happy right now thanks for your comment truly appreciated!!!! Made my day for reals. ~Britney~
|Heather(lilangeleyes) (22.214.171.124) -- Sunday, February 27 2005, 01:19 am|
i love this poem it is a real work of art
keep up the good work
|Britney (172.16.2.18) -- Tuesday, March 1 2005, 05:50 pm|
Hi Heather. Thanks for your comment. I am glad you like it. :). I'll try to keep up the work. ~Britney~
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