The Patriots
Author: Chinmay


You will learn about some men,
Who are for thier country,
More than just someone who brought them victory,
For when thier nation was in danger,
Thier blood boiled in anger,
Without caring for thier personal life,
They left thier parents,children,and wife,
And off they went like real heroes,
To make the enemy feel like zeroes,
These men had muscles like Iron,
And had the hearts of a Lion,
When the enemy faced these men,
The enemy didnt know where to go then,
For one of these men,
Was enough for the enemies ten,
The enemy then ran away like rats,
Like rats run after seeing the cats,
Thus these men saved the country,
Giving it a proud victory,
The heroes of this story,
Work for the world's best military,
These are the great and ever victorious,
Our proud Indian Armed Forces!"


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michelle schmand ( -- Wednesday, May 25 2005, 12:51 am

this is a cool poem

i would like to share this poem with my friends so may i please use this at a patriot breakfast and i am only 6 please
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