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Bet You Wouldn't Know
Author: Britney

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you hear a tear at night
you hear her every fright
you see her not happy tonight
she sits alone..while she cries.
She's sad yet you wouldn't know what she
feels as she sits quietly and lets her
tears flow to make everything go.

That girl that cries at night
sits with every frights
that has no delight that
sits alone in the night that no
one knows she lets this flow.
It's me bet you wouldn't know
this about me though. While
i'm hurting inside.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.166.41.183) -- Sunday, February 27 2005, 10:07 pm

Very good!

Sup B? Very good poem! Very good rhythm! Britney, the rapper! You got a beat yet? I could hear one in my head as I read! keep it up! You're on the road to stardom! *Meri*
Britney (172.16.2.18) -- Monday, February 28 2005, 06:07 pm

lol

Hey Meri!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for reading it. I'm glad you thought it was muy bueno lol. The rapper hmmm got to think about that. Lol. *Stardom* yay that sounds good to me hehe. ~Britney~
shaz (155.239.93.176) -- Friday, March 4 2005, 02:27 am

Sad

I like this alot it tells me of your sadness and loneliness. No one listening or hearing even?
I hear you.
Well done
Britney (67.136.101.6) -- Friday, March 4 2005, 02:35 am

Yes,

It is sad. But kinda true how I feel sometimes kinda alot. my friends pay little attention to it and stuff but yeah life I guess. Thanks for hearing me out !!!!!!!! ~Britney~
 
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