Bloody Valintine
Author: RainFlyer8


Feel the constricting in my chest
Heart stops, fear spreading
Through my breath
Looking at the blankness in your eyes
Hateful, hurtful tears burning
My cheeks, as I cry
Canít believe that you are gone
All my fault
Now where do I belong
I always felt my home was you
Canít believe you left me too
What did I do in the world
I am just an innocent girl
I never did anything to make you die
All I wanted was to fly
Now youíre gone
What can I do
I always thought
Iíd be with you
I wish that I were there with you
Bleeding dying screaming too
Where are you
Can I go there
Instead of crying at your stare
I hold your bloody body
In my arms
Never meant to be harmed
You did nothing
As innocent as I
You did not deserve to die
I look around
The nasty room
Where you came and met your doom
What were you doing
Why were you here
Itís here that you
Confirmed my fears
I look around for something to use
To hurt myself and to soothe
So I can once again be with you
I see knife stuck in a bruise
I pull it out, wincing at the sound
It makes when it hits the ground
It is gross, it is sick
This nasty, horrible, Gruesome Trick
Just a second I resist
Then I start to hack up my wrist
I cut open veins on both my arms
And wait for deathís secret charm
I hold you close, hold you tight
Watch the day turn to night
Now its black, canít see your face
Canít wait to be gone from this place
And be forever loving you
Just like I used to do
I wrap your body around mine
Just how theyíll find us, how divine
It will be so romantic donít you think
Theyíll find us like this; now I sink
Into death here I come
Wait for me, my one true love
Oh my, this is true bliss
Just feeling Deathís first kiss
I'm Dead now, climbing up a thorny vine
to Give you my Bloody Valintine

------- Author's Notes -------

Wow, on this one i kinda scared myself! well what can i say hope you like it!


Comments on this poem/writing:

scurrd ( -- Monday, February 28 2005, 03:09 am

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Mistress ( -- Monday, February 28 2005, 04:26 pm

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Wow, that scared me too. I dug it!
anonymous ( -- Tuesday, March 1 2005, 06:11 am

Double wow wow too!

A gifted mind you have. Advance...for me...kept my intrest all the way to the end....nice work...thanks...Amber!....hope to see more of your work....double wow wow!
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