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Knockin' On Death's Door
4 March, 2005
Author: Jeremy Morzos

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Knockin' on death's door
Screaming at the top of my lungs
Banging my head to the music playing loudly
Jumping up and down in the crowd

I'm wondering who I am?
Where I've been?
Where am I now?
Kick start my heart

Get through this rush hour hell traffic
I don't see anybody comin' or goin'
I'm havin' a good time
This babe is hot

We're dancing together and than
She climbs on top of my shoulders
To see the band playing up there on stage
Bloody people happy and smokin' pot

As if suddenly I feel higher than the clouds
Breathe in and out
I will always remember this night
Knockin' on death's door

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Comments on this poem/writing:

shaz (155.239.93.176) -- Friday, March 4 2005, 03:22 am

Good

I like this it tels me everything and I can feel it too. Well done
 
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