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Sitting In Silence
5 March, 2005
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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I wonder sometimes as we sit together in silence
how close we walk through our separate worlds
Such different paths
yet we walk hand in hand

I wonder sometimes as you lay beside me
if I fill your heart as full as you fill mine
If my smile lights through you like a drug
As yours does mine

You build our home like putting puzzle pieces together
until it all fits; each piece perfectly in it's place
I watch from the sidelines filled with your love
knowing you are doing it for me.. for us

I wonder sometimes as we sit together in silence
If this is our destination
The place some people seek for their entire lives
For I know in my heart.. this IS love.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.203.36) -- Saturday, March 5 2005, 04:48 am

Dreamer, heart fullfilled...now that IS LOVE....

AWWW....the beauty in your words express how love should be...i patiently wait..i hope and pray.... that kind of love reaches me...thank you for sharing and allowing us to feel the warmth of your love....
this is absolutely heart touching it warmed my heart...Terrie*
kyrie anne (152.163.100.197) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 08:47 pm

sad

thats a great poem. u should write more poems simalar to that 1
Orphad (209.213.228.148) -- Monday, March 21 2005, 11:00 pm

fgdsf

How can anyone be for sure!
a person can never explain exactly how they feel to someone in words, theirs alaways something more, isn't their? what if thoes feelings of were not met how that person interpreted them. would that love be false? it is thoes unmentioned feelings in between that are as close as two people can ever get to pure love? but as I interpret your poem that makes no difference as long as the female is satisfied with the amount of love she is reciving.
Dreamer (67.38.179.138) -- Tuesday, March 22 2005, 03:30 am

Orphad

Perhaps it is a matter of trust, Without it there can be no love. Words said without trust are meaningless. Where the words unspoken can be full of meaning; something that a person hears within their heart.
Andrew James Ball (24.251.30.238) -- Friday, March 25 2005, 07:38 pm

Beautyful

A truely beautyful poem showing love.
Dreamer, keep on writing what your heart feels.
Hopeful (71.37.156.96) -- Sunday, February 12 2006, 05:20 am

Love 'n' Trust

like hand in hand together they go, once blended much more they bring into each other. Loved this one Dreamer
 
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