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Tormented Child
4 March, 2005
Author: Taylor James

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all this hurt ive stowed inside
all the pain i have to hide,
smiling fake as they say my name
frowning when they eventually go away.

the tears i cant stop falling from my eyes,
memories i re-live going through my mind,
drowning pool of tears killing me inside
i cant believed you all lied.

you said i wouldn't go through many tough times
seven years in i was ruined for life,
he said it wouldn't hurt
but the pain is still deep in my mind.

i still feel the anger and tourment he put me through
betrayed is how i feel
he is dead
i am alive
i can't find the answers i seek and need to find

------- Author's Notes -------

this poem is so private to me this is the first time i've ever been able to share

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Angel in Tears (81.129.152.182) -- Sunday, March 6 2005, 12:05 am

another masterpiece...

We all get hurt realy badly in our life but we just have to get past it and continue to seek what we crave for.Iam sorry if your still hurting,but I think it has opened a very creative side of you.Keep it up,An Angel in Tears xxx
Meridian (205.188.116.197) -- Monday, March 7 2005, 06:54 pm

What's up, Taylor?

Hey Taylor! Abuse, neglect, torment, torture, and etc. shouldn't have to be endured from a child or a teenager. I'm sorry you had to go through all of that, but hey, we care for you up here. So, I hope to see more of your expressive, profound work! Keep it up Taylor! Excellent words! Excellent poem! *Meri*
 
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