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Author: Angel On The Edge

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My Teary eyes
My broken heart
I cant remember when it all fall apart

I loathe my life
Everything is so murky and dim
Im terrified/petrified
From a life time fulled with sin

I try to be cheerful
I know i should be satisified
Because im blessed with life
But i feel so lifeless
Always misarable, Furious and distressed

I can feel the cold covering me
Pulling me down, my heart is blackering
Hopeless, disheated, Unwanted
Thats what i am

I look in the mirror
Wishing to be anyone but me
My rupulsive face, my hideous thighs
The disgraceful clothes
That cover up these ugly lies

Deserted im all alone
life is harsh
It has saddened me, maddened me, tormented me
When will it let me go free?

My teary eyes
My broken heart
I sit in a gaze
Falling apart!

------- Author's Notes -------

i love dis poem,sometimes i just get really upset-writing helps alot.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (172.16.2.18) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 05:47 pm

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I just read all of your poems I commented on like two of them. But there all wonderful and great keep up the great work! Some I can realate too. Well have a splended day. ~Britney~
AKA (81.1.75.253) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 10:00 pm

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this was very nice, seems like it would fit well in a song. you also write in the same style as me which is cool! nice work
Meridian (64.12.116.197) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 04:28 am

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Hey Aimee! What's good? Yeah, it stinks feeling depressed. It gets you real low to the point where you just wanna mope around all day, like you feel out of it or something. But beautiful way of getting your point across! Keep on keeping on, you're doing an absolutely Fantastic Job Aimee! Take care, Meri
aimee aka bubz (210.55.106.55) -- Friday, March 11 2005, 07:39 am

my godness thanx you guyz meri,aka,britz

thanx you guyz you make me feel good that you lyk my work its so awesome that you read and comment on my poems!!!thats really kool! aimz
 
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