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Alwake In The Midnight Hour
Author: Crush Me

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As i walk these streets at night,I head towards home.
Going down the dangerouis roads were one shouldn't travel alone
and unarmed.As i walk down these streets at nite,
i am not afraid.
There is no reasion to welcome death.
Cause when i think of you i remember.
I have too much to live for.
As i walk down these streets at night,
it is dark and lonely.
But with having you in my mind and in my heart,
i will never feel alone.
As i walk down these streets at nite.I get to thinking..
then i smile at the idea.
One day i will be walking down these streets to you.
Green skies blue grass. Falling off, I'm still on top.
Freezing cold, fills my body with heat.
Who ever said you can't be lovsick was wrong.
I'm having symptoms of you.
You don't know me that well. We are best friends.
We never talk. I said hi to you yesterday.
I never look at you. Why am I staring.
It's so wierd. Doesn't it make sense.
These are the symptoms of you.
It's winter in june. Really hot january days.
Your eyes are so shallow. i start to drown.
My head filled with thoughts. I'm completly thoughtless.
Thinking...I have symptoms of you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (67.169.135.192) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 06:08 am

woah....

This poem is absolutly amazing. I dont know how to describe it, the words i think of cant even cover its greatness. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with me.
~Leah
Crush Me (172.130.166.3) -- Wednesday, March 9 2005, 05:48 pm

Hey Girl!

Keep those symptoms up, and you can walk down any dangerous road you want----well, maybe not just any dangerous road! I like how you have the period symbol after each sentence, to signify your thoughts at the time. One can almost see a girl walking down some street thinking and staring and flirting and ooooo.....get it Crush Me! OUTSTANDING poem! (I'm standing out) Keep on CM! *Meri*
Crush Me (209.158.236.155) -- Thursday, March 10 2005, 01:00 am

thanks

thanks guys so much for u wonderful comments! they mean so much! meri your an amazing writter also! and leah thanks so much!
nezza (211.31.18.123) -- Sunday, March 13 2005, 11:17 am

can i please

can i please your poem as a reference to dreams and reality in my ebglish texts??
 
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