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Questioning You
Author: Angel On The Edge

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i cant go to sleep
im lost
i feel so alone

questions full my head
things need to be said
so...

if i told you about the pain and the tears
would you still be here?

if i told you my life story
would you listen?
Would you care?

if i took that chance again
and gave you my heart
would you drop it?
causing it to smash
Would you treat me like trash
only wanting one thing
let me wake you up from your dream
im not a push over
although it may seem
a could do without
i could love another
because you i truly doubt
doubt that you could love me
this is real love im talking bout
if you dont have this
theres no use for you
so get out

so one final question
i ask of you
is your love for me true?

------- Author's Notes -------

i wrote this just cause lots of guyz are treating ppl like crap.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.204.73) -- Monday, March 14 2005, 07:42 pm

Aimee, Questions ...deserves honest Answers...

i am very impressed w/your writing..so much truth to this that you share with us..in reality
where guys & dolls are concerned in my time i have seen many innocent lookin' females
do the same damage as a guy..(i have seen it)
sometimes damage control can nip it in the bud..sometimes NOT...
your writin' is awesome...have a Gorgeous Day!
Terrie*
aimee aka bubz (210.55.106.9) -- Tuesday, March 15 2005, 05:51 am

terri

yea i know girls treat guyz like crap too.
thanx 4 ur comment
luv aimz xoxoxo
have an awesome day
 
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