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She Isn't What She Seems
Author: Amber H

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She always seemed so perfect no ever knew just what she was going through outside she was smillin tryin to hide the truth inside she was cryin from all the shit that she went through the truth was silence and pain was all she knew you couldnt tell cause she hid it so damn well all she ever wore was rants every cause the cuts so deep upon her leg they bled for so long then the pain was gone

You thought that she was perfect you didnt have a clue till you heard the news syrins sound you look out side your window a tear rolls down your cheek as they pull the white sheet over her pail face you ran over to her place to see to see if it was true you saw a note it was to you it said

Yes its true your to late you didnt see the clues you missed the play every day you left me here alone now im gone but i hope when your grown your not alone your bitterness is what killed i hope you see and not fill free to do it again to someone like me though im not alive please dont cry it was all your fault your tears cant save me now you should have thought about that before maybe you should have treated me better well whatever im gonna end this now the pills are working god forgive im feeling dizzy sincerely yours anyhow o ya one more thing mommy why diddnt you say i love you sincerely your one and only daughter

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Amber H (205.188.209.44) -- Monday, September 22 2003, 10:47 pm

My Poem

this poem goes to mother if she'd just look outside her widow she'd see the daughter she lost through her bitterness
Amber H (205.188.209.44) -- Tuesday, September 23 2003, 03:56 am

sorry

where its says rants it should say pants
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Wednesday, March 31 2004, 08:01 pm

AH! (Amber H)

Darn, this must be suicidal tendencies. But, despite one miscellaneous mistake, I love the way you write. You write with deep feeling, and emotion! You can see the struggles and various trials this person in your poem has to face!

Have fun today!

Meridian
barb (66.46.241.76) -- Sunday, April 4 2004, 12:43 am

amber so sad

your writing describes the torture of what our minds can do. Very good writing,you made me feel the pain.
mandy steder (205.213.111.50) -- Wednesday, May 31 2006, 07:00 pm

i know...

very good... i know know how it is. i hope you can get over the cuttting. it is baddddd.
Lilly (173.209.212.240) -- Sunday, April 26 2015, 08:00 pm

awesome

This is a really good Poem
 
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