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If You Could Tell Me...
Author: Jason

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I went to your house today
But no one was there

I went to your room
It was empty

I went to the backyard
Your parents were there

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I saw your mom
She didn't say anything

I saw your dad
He didn't see me

I saw some cars
And your parents got up

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I followed them to their car
No one saw me get in

I followed them to the graveyard
No one saw me get out

I followed them to a grave
And I saw you!

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I asked you what was wrong
But you were silent

I said that I was here
You didn't know

I looked at the gravestone
I fell into horror

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I heard your gentle voice whisper:
'I have to go'

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I saw you walk away
Why are you leaving?

I tried to follow
Out to the road

I saw a car coming
I looked away

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Suddenly your voice told me
"hello"

------- Author's Notes -------

this isnt a very good poem - it was made at school. but i got an award for it. i think it might make a good dark-rock song to depress you severely though.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

aimee aka bubz (210.55.106.21) -- Tuesday, March 15 2005, 07:45 am

awesome

this poem is actually awesome. i like it, kept up da good work - aimz
Tara (203.220.189.105) -- Thursday, February 2 2006, 10:29 am

nice

nice poem. very touching
 
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