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If Only I Knew
Author: KitKatrina

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She is losing her faith, and all she has known,
Not one emotion left, not one feeling shown,
She’s crying for help, looking to anyone near,
Feeling sorry for herself, alone with her fear,
Her mother has left her, her father left too,
Her sisters all hate her, what more can she do?
What is left to look to, she has not a soul,
What keeps her going, her life is so dull,
One day she realized, she could ease the pain,
She took a needle, stuck it into her vein,
The pain slowly lifted, she felt like air,
Finally she felt good, the pain wasn’t there,
This was the solution, to rid her of tears,
This was the solution, to having no fears,
She found her answer, the pain was gone,
She left the world, from dusk until dawn,
She needed help soon, or else she would die,
I tried to help her, all she would do is lie,
It was too late, she died late last night,
If only I knew, I would’ve put up a fight.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Haven (172.174.227.241) -- Sunday, March 20 2005, 06:08 pm

Wow

This is so sad, but very well written. I hope that all is well in your life...keep up the good work, ok?
~Haven
Britney (69.235.95.48) -- Sunday, March 20 2005, 10:44 pm

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Wonderful! Loved it. ~Britney~
John (82.0.191.150) -- Tuesday, March 22 2005, 10:41 am

True

Extremely well versed poem with excellent message and rhyme...
Gina (24.32.53.47) -- Thursday, July 26 2007, 03:11 am

spiraling down

This made me cry, I don't know what else to say.
annoymous (71.167.195.66) -- Thursday, May 15 2008, 10:31 pm

pleaseeee

csn i use this poem for my term paper please im desparate..... its a sick poem ill write your name please answer me back asap its due tom.
Kilah McKenzie (68.159.92.64) -- Tuesday, October 28 2008, 10:05 pm

Can I borrow sumthing??

Can i please use your poem????
 
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