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So Beautiful
23 March, 2005
Author: Scurrd

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angel so beautiful and kind
i 'll be yours
if you will be mine
i'll give you my heart
my soul, my being
i'd give anything
just to make you happy
to see your beautiful smile
makes this life worthwhile
brightens up my day
and makes all my sadness go away
around you i have nothing to say
my heart gets light
these feelings i can't fight
your what i think about before i sleep
hope to see you in my dreams

------- Author's Notes -------

to A.C.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (70.96.207.95) -- Wednesday, March 23 2005, 03:09 am

aww

How pretty. Who ever this was honred to should appreciate it! ~britney~
Meridian (172.134.180.48) -- Wednesday, March 23 2005, 10:27 pm

aww 2

Darn Britney, you took what I wanted to say for the comment title! LOL! Nevertheless, Scurrd, it's very nice to hear that you've found Juliet. Such a shakespearen, enchanting poem! Fabolicious job!
---Meri
scurrd (4.26.226.55) -- Friday, March 25 2005, 12:14 am

thank you

thank yu for the comments
i am going to give this poem to her for her birthday(hope she likes)
White Crow (66.229.194.165) -- Saturday, June 4 2005, 08:49 pm

To Be Continued.

Scurrd this is W.C. speakin, yo i know how this girl plays out with ya, why dont you tell the rest of your fans, naw i'm just playin with you man but for real i gotta get cas up an readin this comment but be honest i think this is one of your best rymes ive ever read keep it up man...
barb (216.123.57.195) -- Friday, June 10 2005, 09:57 pm

awe 3

tear jerker and so warm,Lucky person who ever you wrote this for. A nice read thanks.
 
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