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Remember When
23 March, 2005
Author: DarkCloud

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Do you remember when
I stood outside your school all sauve
Look at me now I’m about to grawv'
I don’t know how I don’t know when
I love you now, I’ve done my sin

Do you remember when
I first met you, all brave and sly
Look at me now, I had to fall and die
I don’t know how I don’t know when
But I love you now, I’ve done my sin

Do you remember when
I first kissed you, your lips so soft
Now my life is totally aloft
I don’t know how, I don’t know when
But I love you now, I’ve done my sin

Do you remember when
You first got sick, I was there for you
Now I’ve turned into a dick, and it’s true
I don’t know how, I don’t know when
But I love you now, I’ve done my sin

Do you remember when
You first told me no, I told you it was ok, you started to cry
Now I would just say why
I don’t know how, I don’t know when
But I love you now, I’ve done my sin

Do you remember when
We went on our first date, you loved the drive in
Now look how long its been
I don’t know how, I don’t know when
But I love you now, I’ve done my sin

Do you remember when
We first watch Daytona, I didn’t even know who won the cup
That’s why I wrote this, I’ve grown up
I don’t know how, I don’t know when
I still love you, and I’ve done my sin

------- Author's Notes -------

I hope you can forgive me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (172.16.1.231) -- Wednesday, March 23 2005, 06:43 pm

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great poem. ~Britney~
Terrie* (65.142.64.168) -- Thursday, March 24 2005, 08:55 pm

DarkCloud,,

love always overlooks......i agree w/Britney this is indeed a great poem!...i believe you've been forgiven ...great emotion put into this read...keep sharin' that warmth....Terrie*
 
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