Tortured Soul
Author: Demon


My mind and soul are in pain
nothing of mine you will gain
my soul is ripped and torn apart
just like my broken bloody heart
there is a never ending pain
my blood falls down just like rain
Iím treated like dirt
as my soul is hurt
everything i want
is a never ending hunt
everything you said was a lie
i realized as i started to cry
you treated me right
now look at us as we fight
we were great friends
see how it now ends
i loved you
i thought you knew
i thought you loved me
which was another lie i now see
we went through good and bad
as i look back on what we had
why were we even together
if we never even made it to forever
i have a picture of us on my wall
it hurt so much when you never called
as our love fell
my life became living hell
i thought we were happy and doing fine
i now know your no longer mine
everything we had was a lie
now i know why i still cry
After all we went through
i still love you
Iím sorry for what was said
i hope you read this while Iím dead

------- Author's Notes -------

the reason i wrote this poem is because my boyfriend and i have broken up alittle while ago and i was still alittle upset. alot of my poems have to do with death, hate, and slitting my wrists. i am a cutter, and i am in counsling which majorly SUCKS! i am "Goth" if you want to know which is a reason why my poems are always dark. i hope you liked this poem...


Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney ( -- Friday, March 25 2005, 04:12 am


I liked your poem. Pretty good! Keep it up. Kinda good your getting help though ~Britney~ :)
Taylor James ( -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 02:52 pm

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this is exactly how i felt when i broke up with my boyfriend i thought we would last forever but i then realised it was a total lie.i have goth friends and most of there poems are all "dark" aswell, well i hope u find love and happiness as we all deserve it *taylor* x
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