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Bloody Blades
Author: Demon

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I slit my wrists and hope to die
What I see makes me cry
Tears of pain
It still remains
I have many thoughts of my suicide
How I wish I'd just die
The blade turns red
As my wrists bled
It looks as if my fingertips bleed
I now know this is what I need
The pain inside me strats to fade
The kitchen floor is where I laid
My insides burn
My world is black as it turns
My end is near
I do not fear
Death is my friend
As this is my end
This is the ending
As my life is suspending,
Over my bloody self...

------- Author's Notes -------

hello there... here is anohter one of my death poems... hope you liked this one!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

red (68.97.34.102) -- Saturday, March 26 2005, 10:28 pm

nice

i can relate to that but it was really good
SaRa (65.37.85.197) -- Thursday, March 31 2005, 12:14 am

thank you

I totally LOVED your poem! I can definetly relate to it.
Taylor James (212.85.21.178) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 02:47 pm

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i really like this poem,i am at where u have been,keep writing **Taylor**
Laura Owens (199.29.196.5) -- Friday, February 24 2006, 02:11 pm

Don't Give up!

I really liked this poem...i have been there myself.....you can get over this....
Awesome Website....
brik (152.163.100.5) -- Saturday, March 11 2006, 05:51 am

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I know how you feel,I myself cut to, people tell me to not to cut but i do it eney ways but maybe ther right i dont know its just sad seeing someone hurt there self its like a reflection of me
Tersa (65.184.197.70) -- Wednesday, November 1 2006, 10:50 pm

Thanks

I used to cut and i still do from time to time. People ask me why and i tell them "I love the pain, it gets my mind off things."
 
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