Fed up with the order
and the mindnumbing loyalty
that comes with eternal bliss
My love, my life, my creation
You came with your darkness
to save me from the light
You came to me and set me free
into a world of darkness
without meaning or reason
A world without illusions
life as life, death as death
nothing more, nothing less
A world where I´m free.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|barb (22.214.171.124) -- Saturday, March 26 2005, 04:27 am|
Your writing is great ,but I don't know what nihilism is ca you explain it to me and no I don't have a dictionary lol
|mulle (126.96.36.199) -- Saturday, March 26 2005, 05:31 pm|
Hi! Think its a great poem, you did very well, edin....! Yet again...! and im sure you'll do it great again..!
|Edain (188.8.131.52) -- Saturday, March 26 2005, 07:07 pm|
Well this poems is about a very weird experience I had some time ago. I discovered that the idea´s that formed in my head where known to people all around the world as nihilism.
to barb: I suck at explaining things, so here´s a link http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nihilism
|Bolette (10.0.90.58) -- Tuesday, March 29 2005, 07:30 am|
Well, I like it, but here´s a tip... the word darkness, it doesn´t look good...
|edith bedith eller noget (10.0.90.153) -- Tuesday, March 29 2005, 07:34 am|
jeg kan lide det , jeg kan lide det, jeg kan lide det, jeg kan lide det, jeg kan lide det!!!
og jeg kan rigtig godt lide det ... tror du fattede det nu ..
|ursula (10.0.90.58) -- Tuesday, March 29 2005, 07:43 am|
is denke es ist gut und indsirerung!
ich denke das du bist eine süsen junge!
gutentag mein freund!
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