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You Lied
Author: Amber H

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you said you loved me you lied
you said it wouldnt hurt you lied
you reminded me you loved me you lied
you said you wouldnt leave you lied
our relationships based on a lie
so i say goodbye

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, June 27 2003, 01:08 am

Good...

This is a veery good poem. Verry understandable and i like it! SOrry it happened to you though.
Amber H. (205.188.208.138) -- Sunday, September 21 2003, 10:35 pm

leah06

thanks i appriciate that
Amber H (205.188.208.138) -- Monday, September 22 2003, 10:52 pm

robert

this poem goes to my ex man or at least he thought he was a man
Britany Underwood (192.168.101.231) -- Thursday, February 5 2004, 03:55 pm

THANKS

Thank you so much for that poem now I know someone else is going through the same thing I am. Some people just don't understand where we're coming from.
Leah (65.120.100.41) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 08:44 pm

Men should parish for this

I've had this happen to me. I was being played with, he said he loved me, but the retard knew that I knew he was lying but kept on with it. I dumped him. Great poem. A lot can relate to it.
Meridian (205.188.116.131) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 11:44 pm

I applaud you

You did right Amber, by leaving him. Hhahahhaa.
Good for standing up for you self Amber!
Naila (70.128.94.94) -- Thursday, December 1 2005, 11:58 pm

This is wonderful

Hey this is truly wonderful and i wish i could write poetry like you
 
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