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My Own Lil World
Author: Christian V

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i'm lost in my dream
a dream without pain
with nothing to lose
and everthing to gain
always in love
with dat special girl
and wit my bes friend by my side
itz a great kind of world
i dont want to wake up
to face da reality
dat none of dis is real
da pain comes back
and i start to feel
alone all over again
but i dat when i fall asleep
tha pain goes away
i fall in my dream
which happiness will stay
and i know dat when i'm sad
i have a place to go to
My own lil world

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 12:51 am

In your world...

I hope some day i caould be in your world as a friend to keep you happy. I try now by the distance is harder to acoplish those things. I will always be here for you and you know that. So come into my world and be happy because you are always welcome! Great poem scott! Love it!
CrYsTaL (206.214.64.243) -- Tuesday, May 27 2003, 09:47 pm

wow!!!!!!!!! :)

This poem really relates to the way I feel about my own lil world. Sometimes I even forget I live in reality. Great poem, hope you write many more like them.
leah (142.59.104.228) -- Wednesday, September 17 2003, 11:25 pm

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We all have our own 'lil' worlds but reality is is out dere...lol
 
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