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I Can't Wish You Back
29 March, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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final good bye..
as I stand there
feeling the heaviness
of my broken heart
I can't wish you back

a final good bye
as I think of the times
you were the breath
beneath my wings
I am forced to say farewell

good times long gone
with one final good-bye

this time my heart
has been broken and shattered
love and all that mattered
was taken away

the closest I can come to you
are my melted tears
as I sift and reminise
through our life
as your loving wife

------- Author's Notes -------

August 1991

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Comments on this poem/writing:

angel s. (64.33.185.123) -- Monday, June 26 2006, 12:56 am

nice

i thought that was a good poem.. i could kinda relate that to me but it was my dad who passed.. by the way im 12... i liked this poem a lot.
Terrie* (66.81.138.10) -- Monday, June 26 2006, 11:13 pm

Hi Angel

thank you for readin' and for your sincere comment,i am sooo sorry Luv, to hear of your loss.my children also were fairly young when their dad expired, my thoughts and prayers for strength are at your side..
 
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