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The Way I Feel About You
Author: Christian V

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As I look into your eyes
I feel as if the world has disappeared all around us.
My mind goes blank
My stomach tightens.
When I see you walking by
I know there’s a god
Because nothing else could create something so beautiful
And as time goes by
With that special kiss
That lasted only a seconded
But seemed like forever
I now know that I want to be with you
Forever, if possible
I know only fate and god
Could have brought me something so great and beautiful as you
I would give anything in the world I can jus to be with you
If it was only for a mere point of time
With this said
I love for you
And care for you
I wish you feel the same.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (64.12.97.9) -- Monday, April 28 2003, 10:22 pm

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Aw....sweet!
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Monday, April 28 2003, 10:56 pm

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i hope your talking about me not ashley...ima woop your butt if you aint
Roy (152.163.189.100) -- Monday, April 28 2003, 11:40 pm

Cool poem

I can look at your poem something that applies to me
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 12:22 am

Awsome!

This is soooo sweet and unexplainable to my exact words. I think you are an awsome poet! Even if you dont belive me. Who ever this girl is, she is lucky to have somone like you feel like this twords her. I wish i knew what it felt like to feel like that towords someone else. This was beyond Awsome! I hope one day somone will feel like this to me too. Great Poem! So far it is my Favorate of yours!
Christian V. (66.136.203.116) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 12:43 am

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thanx guys and gals.i wrote this as you can tell for a girl named ashley, some one that i care for more than any other woman i've ever known.
ryan (24.153.177.14) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 02:51 am

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i thought i was for me scott i hate you >tear tear>
casey (12.8.38.33) -- Saturday, May 24 2003, 05:05 pm

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aww scott ur the best and good job!!
 
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