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Just Like Romeo And Juliet
Author: Angel On The Edge

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We were like Romeo and Juliet
The day that we meet
We knew it was meant to be
Every little bit of beauty came shinning through your eyes
You meant the world to me
you were my light that shone so bright
in the dark, so i could see

this wasnt meant to happen
you said you would always be there
to love me
but you are gone now
its not fair
the drunk driver was in the wrong

there is no beauty in this world
i have no light, as i sit in the dark
everything i once had, is gone
theres no point in trying to be strong
because life is now completly wrong

and all that i am and all that ill be
means nothing at all
if you cant be here with me

so just like romeo and juliet
id give up everything for you
my life included
so as i hold thid gun against my heart
it beats one last time

------- Author's Notes -------

this is my almost fav poem that i have wrote.hope you lyk it to!!! comments would be good from all....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Shira (67.21.254.200) -- Thursday, March 31 2005, 05:36 am

Amazing

This poem really does show how someone feels after they lose someone. Be strong for them.
aimee aka bubz (202.89.42.15) -- Thursday, March 31 2005, 06:05 am

shira

thanx-i wrote this poem after we read a poem in english bout a guy losing sum1.!!hasnt happened to me-luckly!!!thanx 4 your comment
Meridian (172.175.175.93) -- Thursday, March 31 2005, 11:44 pm

Aims!

Aww, so special! Romeo and Juliet---superb poem Aimee! You're on a roll girl! No matter how many times people say that love between that girl and boy is forbidden, they continue loving anyway! Hi five Aimee! Lovely Bubz!
---Meri
aimee aka bubz (202.89.42.141) -- Friday, April 1 2005, 11:09 pm

meri

hey=thanx for you awesome comment!you sound lyk a really kool person!!!have a wonderful week.
hi five to that..... bubz
 
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